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Goodbye, Susan by Saxis

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   Dear Diary: I’m so horny I could fuck a horse!  

       Diane paused to read the entry she had just printed into her diary, a wicked little smile bending her lips.  Suddenly inspired, she added: Make that two horses, please, WITH BIG DICKS!

       It was a warm day in early August.  Diane lay on her stomach in her bed, dressed only in a t-shirt and a pair of baggy gym shorts.  A cool breeze wafted in through an open window, smelling of honeysuckle and damp earth—the fragrances of the country.  Now Diane dropped her pen to the bed, and with her eyes closed, slid both hands beneath her hips.  Her fingers immediately found her horny spot, and she pushed down hard with her hips, once, twice, three times.

       She was going to masturbate.  Diane knew it at once, and had known it ten minutes earlier when she turned the lock on her bedroom door.  All day long she had been on “red alert,” as her friend Lisa liked to say, her thighs and pussy alive with hunger.  And now...now she was going to make things worse.  She could use her fingers, or she could use the special antiperspirant bottle she kept in her drawer.  Two hours later she would only be hornier than ever.  What she wanted, needed, for once in her life was a man.  No, forget the man: all she needed was a hard cock, warm and pulsing, with plenty of jism to pump into her ripe, virgin little pussy.  Let her ride on that for, oh, say a month, and she might even be sane again.

       Diane had worked her fingers into her shorts and was prodding gently at the little button of moist flesh in her crotch, her hips working slowly around and around, up and down.  One finger poked at her pussy hole, pushed into it.  She shivered and pushed with her hips, and suddenly it was as if a wall were coming down inside her.  For months she had been toying with a thought too dangerous to contemplate, not really thinking it—just playing with it.  Now it came into her mind clear and unrestrained.  What she needed to do was get out of Pisga, away from all the cattle farms and the Bible-toting boys with blocky haircuts and the TV commercials urging you to try the new weed ‘n feed with the patented baloney additive.  She knew exactly where she wanted to go, too: Los Angeles, where her horny, beautiful cousin Susan lived these days and could provide her with a room and a bed for a while.

       For years, much of the family’s table talk had been about Susan and the way she was “rather liberal with herself,” as Diane’s father liked to say.  Diane had long ago decided that in plain words Susan was a slut, which exactly suited her needs.  Even if Susan did have a high-powered job now and had given up some of her wild ways, she would understand it if her younger cousin seemed to have a different guy in her bedroom every night.  She could do her own thing, and there would be no harsh words between them.

       Realizing she was now too horny only to use her fingers, in a single quick motion she flipped over on her back and stripped off her shorts and panties, then kicked them toward the door.  By the time they fell to the carpet she had her drawer open and was clutching at the special antiperspirant bottle with the rounded cap.

       The bottle was large, and sometimes it hurt going into her, at least at first.  She doubted if that was going to be a problem this time, though.  Thinking about moving out to LA and getting her pussy full of cock on a nightly basis had made her even more wet than normal.

       With a quirky little smile that would later guarantee her all the sex she ever needed from adoring males, Diane lay back on the bed and very deliberately positioned the bottle at the mouth of her pussy, pushed once, gently, then slammed it up inside her.

       Across Diane’s room from her was her dresser mirror; she looked into it and saw an eighteen-year-old girl with long blonde hair, her feet spread wide apart and her hips lifted off the bed, the butt end of a glass antiperspirant bottle sticking out of her pussy.

       Smiling at herself in the mirror—she always liked the way she looked at these times—she worked the bottle in and out, in and out, going faster and faster, her eyes never leaving the mirror.  As she pushed the bottle into her, her ass pumped up and down, keeping rhythm.  From far off she heard the doorbell ring.  Diane listened to it with a slight feeling of regret.  Lisa had said she’d be over in a couple of minutes, which was now.

       She had to stop, only she noticed she didn’t.

       Only the night before she and Lisa had stayed up talking about this and that, but mainly about boys and sex, sex, sex.  The more they had talked, the more excited they had gotten, and toward the end of the evening they had been sitting on her bed wearing t-shirts and panties, and the room had smelled of wet pussies.

       “I swear, Diane, your pussy smells ripe enough to eat,” Lisa had said, and laughed.

       Diane remembered she had said, “Yeah, but you know there aren’t any boys in Pisga that eat pussy.  This is the deadest place in the whole world.”

       To which Lisa had replied, “Well if you want somebody to eat your pussy, you should let me do it.  I’ll bet I’d be good at it.”

       After that they had talked about eating pussy for quite a while, even discussing different things they could do with their tongues, but for some reason talk had been as far as it had gotten.  Too scared, Diane thought.  What we needed was something to give us a shove.

       The doorbell rang again, more insistently this time.  Deep in her hips an orgasm was building, a warm pleasant feeling that threatened to take control of her thoughts, her feelings—her hands.

       Abruptly, without thought, Diane slammed her ass onto the mattress and squeezed her pussy tight.  She worked the bottle in and out, slowly, the feelings much more intense now because of the greater friction.

       One more.  One more.

       She was losing it, about to orgasm.  An orgasm would be fine, she thought...but talking to Lisa in the mood she was in now, before she orgasmed, would be much, much nicer.  She would be horny out of her mind, and Lisa was always horny.  Who could tell what would happen.

       Her fingers worked the bottle, again and again, taking her further and further into danger.

       She stopped.  With icy resolve, Diane plucked the antiperspirant bottle from her gushing pussy, wiped it on her t-shirt with a grin.  The bottle went back in its drawer, she into her shorts—forget the panties—and in less than a minute she was down the steps and at the front door, horny and sweaty and breathing hard, her pussy still trembling on the verge of an orgasm.

       “That certainly took long enough.”

            Lisa stood in the doorway, her bare sun-tanned arms held across her chest in a comical impatient-Indian pose.


Goodbye Susan Reviewed by Kevin R. Tipple
Goodbye Susan written By Saxis
© 2002
Rating: *****

As frequent readers of this column know, I have a definite bias in what I
prefer in novels, whether they contain erotica or not. I prefer books with
actual plot, storylines, character development and the like. With the added
component of erotica, the work should not become just a string of sexual
scenes one after another. Knowing what I like might just explain why I rate
this exceptional novel so highly. Simply put, this is very good stuff and
you owe it to yourself to read this one.

There are several storylines running through this novel so I am simplifying
greatly in the course of the review. The main storyline revolves around
Susan who is a VP and Regional Sales Manager for JoJo Cosmetics. Based in
Los Angeles, she has responsibility for the western half of the country and
business isn’t going so well. The company is having its first ever loss and
the Board of Directors is forcing out the company founder Joanne Johnston.
Company President Lois Maxwell is looking to save herself and shift the
blame onto Susan’s shoulders. Susan is aware of her deceit and has a plan of
her own.

Susan decides her best course of action would be to seduce the son of the
Boss on one of her accounts and use him to help her drive the profits back
up. The boss and his wife will be out of town the next six months and she
would not be able to get to him anyway. But the son is high up in the
company and single and Susan figures to easily manipulate him. Not only
would she be able to work on raising the profitability of the account but
also she might find out other bits of info via pillow talk to use in her
fight against Lois Maxwell. But, Mark, the intended target does not fall
into her clutches so easily.

Susan soon learns that office politics can be far messier that she ever
dreamed. While some of it is exceedingly enjoyable for her (and the reader)
she learns that it can have unintended consequences that touch other lives
as well. Those lessons fundamentally change her life perceptions and what
she is as a human being.

This is a very complicated novel to review as it has a number of
simultaneous storylines. The writing is superb with complicated evolving
characters that quickly become very real for the reader. The erotic elements
are graphic and fit nicely into the characters as they evolve. The true test
is the fact that this novel works, even if the erotic elements were stripped
away. This novel is extremely well written and enjoyable and I hope this is
not the last we hear from Saxis.


Kevin Tipple is reviewer for http://www.peacockblue.com and can be reached
at kevin_tipple@peacockblue.com


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